The Proposal
Harry
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Summary:
ItÕs the
summer after their 7th year, and James is ready to propose to Lily. The catch?
She's gone home to be with her parents. What's a bloke to do?
~*~
"Ten
steps toward the fireplace. Stop, curse, turn around. Ten steps back toward the
dining table. Mutter, rake hands through hair, wave arms wildly, turn back
toward the fireplace. Repeat ad nauseam," the obviously amused voice said
from where the owner sat on the sofa.
James
Potter stopped mid-pace to look at his friend. "What are you talking about,
Padfoot?"
"That's
what you've been doing for the past..." Sirius checked his watch,
"twenty-two minutes. Prongs, what the hell is going on?"
"Sod
off, Sirius. I'm not in the mood."
Remus
slowly lowered the book he was reading to his lap and watched his friends with
a small grin on his face. "Now, James," he said. "You have to
admit that this is a bit out of character for you. Something the matter?"
James
waved his hands dismissively. "No, no, 'course not. Why would you think
that?" He raked his hands through his hair again. "Where's
Peter?"
"Changing
the subject, Potter?"
"No,
Sirius, I'm not changing the subject. I need to talk to you. All of you. Where is he?"
"I'm
right here, James," Peter said, coming out of the kitchen holding a
sandwich in one hand and a bottle of butterbeer in the other. He looked at
Remus and Sirius, "Hasn't he done pacing, then? He's driving me
barmy."
"I
wasn't pacing." James stopped at the looks of stunned disbelief on his
friends' faces. "What? I wasn't," he insisted.
"Right.
That's why there's a path worn in the floor between the table and the
fireplace," Remus said.
James
blushed slightly. "All right, maybe I was pacing. I'm a bit nervous."
"No,
really,"
Sirius said sarcastically. "We never would have guessed. Now would you get
on with whatever it is you have to say to us? I'm meeting someone in an
hour."
Peter
flopped on the sofa next to Sirius and took a bite of his sandwich.
"Rewwy?" He swallowed. "Sorry. Who's it this time?"
Sirius
rolled his eyes at Peter. "Sally Ann Knowles. You know, the Hufflepuff? We
started talking on the train home, and I thought I might as well ask. She said
yes, so...."
"Oh,
she's nice. Not bad looking, either. I like her hair—" Peter broke
off when Remus cleared his throat and nodded at James, who had started pacing
again. "Right. Sorry, James. Go ahead."
James
cleared his throat nervously. "You, er... you know that I went to my vault
yesterday?"
"Yeah,
and..."
Sirius said, motioning impatiently for James to continue.
"Sirius,
would you let the man speak, please," Remus rebuked.
"If
he'd just get on with it, then I wouldn't have to give him a hard time about
it."
"Right,
well, I went to the vault, and I picked something up. And now I'm trying to
decide what to do with it. Well, not what to do with it exactly, just when to do it, you know? I don't
know if I should just go over there right now, or if I should wait, or..."
James trailed off as Peter shook his head.
"Is
anyone else as confused as I am? Or is it just me?"
"No,
Peter, it's definitely not just you," Remus said slowly. "James,
maybe you should sit down and tell us what's going on."
James
dug something out of the pocket of his trousers before sinking into the
armchair facing the sofa.
"James?"
Remus prodded.
James
took a deep breath. Then he took another, and another, until Sirius got up from
his seat on the sofa, walked over to the kitchen, and then reappeared a few
minutes later with a bottle of firewhiskey and four glasses. After filling a
glass for each of them, he handed them around and said, "Drink. You
especially, James. You're hyperventilating." He sat back and sipped his
drink slowly, watching as James downed his firewhiskey in one gulp. "Now
talk."
James
opened his hand and revealed the item he'd taken out of his pocket—a
small, black velvet jeweller's box.
"Is
that what I think it is?" Remus asked.
James
took another deep breath. "I'm going to ask Lily to marry me. So I went to
the vault to get this." He opened the box to reveal a simple but elegant
engagement ring made of a flawless, solitary ruby set in a gold band.
"It's been in the family for generations—my great-grandmother was
the last one to wear it."
"That's
brilliant, James," Remus said. "So why the pacing?"
James
stood up, agitated. "Well, she's not here, is she? She went home to get
her things and spend some time with her parents before coming back."
"She'll
be back in a couple of weeks, Prongs," Sirius said. "You waited six
and a half years before she'd even talk to you, and now you can't wait thirteen
more days?"
"You
don't understand, Padfoot."
"Then
explain it to me," Sirius shot back.
James
looked at Remus for help and was rewarded with a shrug. "Don't ask me,
mate. I haven't gone out with anyone since Christmas. How am I supposed to know
why you can't wait?"
"I'm
not saying I can't wait," James retorted, frustrated. "I'm just
saying that I'm not sure if I should wait. I want it to be perfect. Lily
deserves for it to be perfect," he finished quietly.
"Why
don't you just go over to her parent's house and see her?" Peter asked.
"Why
don't I just go over—" James started incredulously.
"You
know, James, that's not such a bad idea," Remus said. "You're
obviously going mad sitting here—and that thing's just burning a hole in
your pocket. Besides, being a Muggleborn, I'd bet Lily would love it if you
asked her father for permission to marry her."
James
gulped audibly. "A-ask her father for permission? But I... They don't
really do
that, do they?"
Sirius
grinned. "'Course they do, Prongs. You don't think someone would make that
up, do you?"
"Well...er...yeah.
That's so old-fashioned. Seems almost...medieval or..." James looked at
Sirius with narrowed eyes. "Hang on. How would you know, Padfoot? You're not
Muggleborn."
"It's
a widely known fact, Prongs," Sirius replied smugly. "No, really, it
is. Ask Remus."
James
swung his gaze back to Remus, feeling a little sick. "Is he...is he having
me on?" he whispered.
Remus'
lips quirked, but he said with a straight face, "'Fraid not, Prongs. It's
a tradition."
"Bloody
hell." James sank back in his chair. "How do I go about doing that? I
hardly know the man. I mean, I've met him a few times, but our conversations
consisted mainly of him asking me about school and me responding, 'Yes, sir' or
'No, sir'. We haven't talked at all about me and Lily."
"Like
I said, Prongs," Peter said, waving his now empty hand around, "go
over there to see her. You don't have to talk to her father right
then—"
"Well,
not about Lily, anyway," Sirius supplied.
"Is
that supposed to be helpful, Padfoot? Because it isn't," James said.
Peter
continued on as though he hadn't been interrupted, "—just talk about
every day kind of stuff. Let him see what kind of man you are, let him know you
have prospects. That sort of thing."
"Prospects?"
"You
know—you've a job lined up, a place to live, money in the bank, that sort
of thing."
"Right.
Prospects. I can do that."
"But
don't brag, James," Remus cautioned. "You don't want to come across
like you think you're better than them. Just be yourself."
"Your
new
self," Sirius added. "Don't be that prat you were back in
school."
"I
wasn't a prat!" James protested.
"Yes,
you were," Remus said. "We all were. That's why it took Lily six and
a half years before she'd talk to you. But you're not a prat now."
"Tell
them my prospects, be myself," James repeated. "Anything else I need
to know?"
"Do
not, under any circumstances, get pissed," Sirius replied, deadpan.
"You're an obnoxious drunk."
"Shut
it, Padfoot! Like you have any room to talk. I wouldn't do that. I'm not
stupid."
Remus
stood up and gently removed the empty glass from James' hand. "Best let me
have this, then, mate, or you'll be drunk before you get there."
"I'll
sober up before tomorrow."
"You're
not going tomorrow, Prongs; you're going tonight," Sirius said.
"Sooner rather than later, if I've anything to say about it."
"If
you go now, you'll get there in time for dinner," Peter added helpfully.
"Tonight?
Now?"
James asked in a panicky voice. "Get stuffed! No way. I'm not going
tonight. I-I'm not ready."
Remus
rolled his eyes at him. "Yes, James, tonight. I, for one, can't stand the
thought of being around you like this for any longer than I have to. Now, are
you going to Apparate on your own, or do we need to find some other way to get
you there? And James?"
"Yeah?"
James said warily.
"Remember
who you're dealing with before you make that decision."
James
looked around at the determined faces of his three best friends, remembered
that they weren't known as the best pranksters in Hogwarts' history for
nothing, took out his wand, thought about Lily's neighbourhood, and
Disapparated.
He
thought he heard a faint "Thank God" right before he disappeared.
~*~
James
arrived at the corner of Summerdale Place and Meadow Crescent with a soft pop.
He immediately checked his pocket for the jeweller's box, then glanced around
to familiarise himself before turning and walking toward where the Evans' house
should be located. He'd never been there before, but Lily had described the neighbourhood
to him in such detail, he knew he wouldn't have any trouble finding her
parents' house. As he walked, he started rehearsing what he was going to say
when he saw her.
"'Lily,
what a surprise'," he muttered. "No, that's stupid; it's her house, she'd
be the one to
be surprised. What about, 'Hi, Lily. Fancy meeting you here.' No, that's worse
than the first. Um...'Hello, Lily. Can I talk to you?'" He groaned.
"That last is my best bet, I reckon. Pathetic."
He
paused to wipe his hands on his trousers and take a deep breath before turning
the final corner onto her street. "Okay, calm down, Potter. Just be
yourself, don't be a prat, don't get drunk. You can do this," he muttered.
Resolute, he started walking again, only to come to a sudden halt ten yards
from the house. At least he thought it was the Evans' house. It looked just
like Lily had described, except...there was a man—a huge man, he corrected
himself—and a skinny, horse-faced woman getting out of a car parked in
front. Confused, he searched his memory, trying to come up with any detail that
might tell him he was in the right place. Then he caught a glimpse of red hair.
He let out the breath he hadn't known he was holding and ran his hands through
his hair one more time. He had just taken the first few steps toward the house
and was getting ready to call out to her when she noticed him.
"James?
James, is that you?" Lily started running toward him, and he met her
halfway, catching her in a big hug and twirling her around before setting her
on the ground.
"Hello,
love," James said. He could feel himself grinning like an idiot at the
sight of her.
"What
are you doing here?" she asked.
"Hmph.
If that's the sort of reaction you give a bloke after not seeing him for
several days..." he trailed off, giving her a cheeky grin.
"Several
days, my foot. You just saw me the day before yesterday," she retorted.
"Unless you're telling me that you forgot that kiss on the train?"
James
blinked. "Forget the kiss? Er, no, love. That's not something a man's likely
to forget. Ever. Why do you think I'm here now instead of in two weeks?"
Lily
blushed prettily before grabbing his arm and dragging him toward the house.
"Well, come on, then. You're just in time for dinner. I'll get Mum to set
another place, and you can join us."
James
hesitated. "I don't want to intrude. I'll just come back after you've
eaten."
"Oh,
no, you don't, James Potter. You're coming with me. It'll be no trouble. Mum
always cooks too much food." She gave him a grin. "Besides, I need
you to help keep me sane. My sister and her husband came for dinner."
"Your
sis—oh, you mean that—"
"That
overly large man you saw getting out of the car is my brother-in-law, Vernon;
the woman is my sister, Petunia."
James'
eyes narrowed. "You mean the sister who wrote you a letter telling you not
to bother coming to her wedding because she didn't want a freak there? That sister?"
"Now,
James..." Lily placated. Or rather, tried to placate.
"Don't
you 'Now, James,' me, Lily Evans."
"It's
okay, really. I've forgiven her."
"I
don't care. I haven't," James muttered.
"She
just...she doesn't understand," Lily said quietly. "That's just the
way she is. She's never understood things that are different, even when we were
growing up. It's not worth getting upset over. I learned that a long time
ago."
"She
hurt you."
"She
wasn't the first, and she won't be the last."
James
felt his shoulders tense. "Who else hurt you? Did they apologise? Tell me,
so I can make sure they—"
"Oh,
James. You're very sweet, trying to protect me like this, but, really, it isn't
necessary. I'm a big girl. I get over having my feelings hurt."
He
stopped and turned to look at her. "You shouldn't have to."
She
stood on her tip-toes and gave him a quick kiss on the cheek. "Everybody
has to, James. It's part of being an adult. I'm fine with it. I wish you would
be, too. Are you hungry or not? Come and meet mum and dad."
"All
right, but I'd better not hear anything that sounds remotely like freak come out of either of their
mouths."
"You
won't."
"I'd
better not."
"You're
really cute when you're riled up, you know that?" She patted his arm as
they walked to the front door.
"You're
always cute," he responded seriously.
"Why,
thank you." She leaned up and gave him a lingering kiss before sending him
a flirtatious smile and opening the door. "Flattery will get you
everywhere." She winked and left him spluttering in the doorway, sweeping
in calling, "Mum, Dad, James is here. I invited him to stay for dinner, if
that's all right."
William
Evans stuck his head around a corner. "Of course it's all right, Lily. You
know your mum always makes more than enough food. Why don't you bring him in
the lounge? Vernon and I were about to have a drink, and he can join us."
"All
right, Dad. Thanks." She walked back to where James was waiting and
grabbed his hand. "Come on in, James. Dad said it was fine for you to
stay, but..."
"But
what? I don't like the sound of that."
She
looked at him apologetically. "But you're going to have to go into the
lounge with him and Vernon. They're having drinks, and Dad specifically said
you should join them."
James
groaned. "Lily, I came here to see you, not your giant of a
brother-in-law."
"Please?"
she pleaded. "For me? I'll make it up to you, I swear I will."
James
sighed before saying, "All right. For you. But you owe me one."
She
stood on her tip-toes again and whispered sweetly in his ear, "I always
pay my debts, James. You should know that by now. Now go on. It won't be that
bad."
James
turned toward the lounge like a man facing his worst nightmare—or worse,
his hopefully future father-in-law—but turned around when Lily grabbed
his arm to stop him. "Wait," she said before pulling his head down to
kiss him thoroughly.
"What
was that for?" James mumbled.
She
shot him an embarrassed grin. "Luck. Oh, and James, please don't hurt
Vernon, even though he is an overbearing lout. It wouldn't make a good
impression. I'll be in the kitchen helping Mum if you need me." She gave
him a gentle push toward the lounge and headed off down the hall to the kitchen
door.
~*~
James
stood uncertainly in the doorway, trying not to fidget. He'd met Mr. Evans
before, of course, but he'd never had to talk to him without Lily there to
help. And I've never been planning to ask him for his daughter's hand in
marriage, either, he
thought. He looked around the room, taking in the tasteful decorations and the
myriad of photographs that adorned the room. There were several pictures of
each of the daughters as they grew up, and others of the family together,
placed on tables or the mantelpiece. He couldn't help but smile, looking at the
photos—Lily had been just as beautiful as a small child as she was now.
Mr.
Evans noticed James standing in the doorway and motioned him to come in,
saying, "Ah, James, there you are. Stop by to see Lily, did you?" He
gave the younger man a knowing look.
James
cleared his throat nervously. "Er, yes, sir. I'm sorry to pop in
unexpectedly like this, but I was just..."
"Missing
my daughter," the other man said with a mischievous twinkle James thought
he had seen somewhere else. Don't worry about it, James, I understand
perfectly. Here, come in, sit down, have a drink. The ladies will let us know
when dinner is ready. What would you like?"
"Oh,
er, anything is fine, really. Whatever you're having looks good. I'm not much
of a drinker." Not a total lie, he told himself. Not much of a
drinker of Muggle drinks, in any case.
"All
right then," Mr. Evans said and went over to the sideboard to pour James a
drink. "James, have you met my son-in-law, Vernon Dursley?"
"No,
sir, I haven't had the pleasure." He stuck his hand out to the beefy man
sitting on the sofa and winced when Vernon squeezed—hard. "James
Potter. Pleased to meet you."
"Potter,"
Vernon said, squeezing harder, as if trying to prove his superiority over
James.
So
that's how it's going to be, eh? James thought. All right then. Two can play at that game.
He may be bigger than I am, but I'll wager a hundred galleons that I'm
stronger. James
shook Vernon's hand firmly, adding a bit more pressure than was necessary. He
took in the look of shock on the other man's face before letting go, turning to
accept his drink from Lily's father. "Thank you, Mr. Evans."
"Call
me William, James. You've finished school; you're an adult now."
"All
right, Mr. Ev—William."
"Have
a seat, James. Rose said it would be a few minutes until dinner is ready."
James
looked around the room again and chose an armchair across the room from Vernon.
He couldn't bring himself to sit next to the man, and, he admitted to himself,
he found himself fascinated by the large...caterpillar on the other man's upper
lip.
"Where
did you and Lily meet?" James was startled when he heard the question.
Vernon had spent so much time droning on about his job at Drunnungs...
Gunnys...something like that, that James knew without a doubt that the man had
no sense of common courtesy. Even Mr. Ev—William, he corrected himself—had
hardly been able to get a word in edgewise.
"We
went to school together," James replied cautiously. He didn't know how
much Petunia had told her husband about Lily—and he didn't know what
Vernon's reaction would be if he discovered she was a witch if he hadn't known
before. Based on the little he'd seen of the man, though, he was convinced that
it wouldn't be good.
And
as he watched Vernon's reaction to the news, he knew that he was right. The
man's eyes got very large, the colour left his face, and he started to breathe
heavily before he pushed himself off of the sofa and said in a panicky voice,
"You-you're one of them. I-I need...please excuse...I-I need to go find
Petunia." He then waddled as quickly as his legs would carry him off
toward the kitchen.
James
looked over at William, prepared to apologise, and was shocked to find the
older man struggling to keep himself from laughing.
"Oh,
I say, James, that was wonderful. He's not known for his tolerance. And I know
about the letter he and Petunia sent Lily before they got married. You handled
that very well."
James
grinned, relieved. "Thanks. I didn't want to tell him about the wizarding
world if he didn't already know, but I didn't exactly want to lie,
either." He looked at Lily's father curiously. "If you don't mind me
asking...why was he so terrified when he found out I was one of them, as he so succinctly put
it?"
"Ah,
that. He got on Lily's bad side one day and met up with the wrong end of her
wand, if you know what I mean."
James
nodded ruefully. "Yeah, I'm quite familiar with Lily's temper. What did she
do to him?"
William
grinned. "Turned his hair blue and green. Then, when he started yelling at
her, she added red and gold stripes to his face."
"That's
my girl," James said proudly, missing the fond expression on her father's
face.
"Indeed;
my response exactly. What do you say we go see how dinner is coming along? I'm
getting hungry. Besides," William added, leaning closer to James
conspiratorially, "I want to watch Vernon squirm some more."
~*~
James
sat in his chair at the dining table and listened in disbelief as the Vernon droned
on—again—about the new house he and Petunia had recently purchased.
Does he ever
stop talking about himself? To think Remus warned me about coming across like I
thought I was superior to everybody. Although...he does seem nervous...keeps
shooting suspicious looks over at Lily and me.
"It's
in an excellent neighbourhood. Number Four Privet Drive. There's a play park
down at the end of the street—it will be perfect for when Petunia and I
decide to start a family."
By
some miracle, James was able to hide his shudder at the image that comment
brought to mind. Of course, the soft snicker from the beautiful woman beside
him didn't help the situation any.
"I'd
hate to see what their children are going to look like," Lily whispered
softly.
James
snorted, causing both Vernon and Petunia to look at him fearfully. He quickly
coughed and apologised, "Sorry, something caught in my throat." He
chanced a glimpse at Lily, who was trying to stifle a giggle.
"Stop
that," he whispered at her. "You'll get me in trouble. I'm trying to make a good impression
here."
"Don't
worry about that," she whispered back. "You've already made a good
impression. My dad loves you. He's much more relaxed around you than he's ever
been around that...that..."
"Giant
bag of gas?" James offered helpfully.
"Exactly.
What did the three of you talk about earlier?" she asked.
"Hm.
Not much, actually. We ended up listening to Vernon prattle on about his job,
and his house, and his car, and his—"
"All
right, all right, I get the point."
"After
I scared him off, your dad mentioned theÉimprovements you made to his
appearance in the past." James winked. "Vernon seemed a bit nervous
to discover that I was one of, and I quote, 'them'."
Lily
rolled her eyes. "He did, did he? I'll just bet you loved hearing
that."
"Well,
I have to admit it was a shock, to hear that my sweet, innocent Lily would do
something so Slytherinish," he said, giving her a roguish grin.
"Oh,
because you've never seen me lose my—"
"Ahem.
Lily, dear? Would you and James like to share your conversation with the rest
of us?"
Lily
blushed and looked at her mother guiltily. "No, Mum. Sorry."
Rose
smiled indulgently at her daughter. "It's all right, dear. I just didn't
want you to ignore the rest of us. It's been so long since we've seen you. And
we do want to get to know your young man better."
James
bit his lip to keep himself from laughing at Lily's disgruntled expression.
After he felt he had himself under control, he apologised. "I'm sorry,
Mrs. Evans, I was just telling Lily about the house I just moved into. I didn't
want to bore everyone with all the details." He studiously avoided looking
in Vernon's direction while he spoke.
"Call
me Rose, dear. You've moved into a new house, you said?"
"Yes,
I went straight there after seeing Lily off the other day," James replied,
relaxing as he saw the house in his mind's eye. "It's in a small town
called Godric's Hollow. It—the house, I mean—isn't anything fancy,
but it's nice and cosy. It'll be a nice place to come home to after work. Of
course, it needs a bit of work still. I haven't had a chance to get it
completely set up yet."
"Oh,
you have a job, then, Potter?" Vernon asked belligerently. "What does
someone of your...kind...do
for a living?"
James
absently patted Lily's arm when she bristled at Vernon's question and then
grabbed her hand when he felt her start to go for her wand. He shot her a
warning look, before turning to answer Dursley.
"Oh,
I accepted a job in the MLES. Law enforcement," he qualified when he saw
the blank looks he was receiving.
"Law
enforcement?" Petunia spoke for the first time. "OhÉ you mean a police
constable.
How...quaint."
James
could tell by her expression—largely by the way that her nose was stuck
in the air—that what she really meant was, "How plebeian." He
squeezed Lily's hand in reassurance.
"Yes,
well, it's a special division in the government. We specialise in tracking down
the real villains—the ones you need rigorous training to catch," he
responded blandly. "It's actually quite competitive; they base selection
on your marks in school, your scores on the end of the year exams, and a
practical exam they give to all the applicants." He didn't bother
mentioning that he'd been the top-ranked applicant in this year's training
class, outscoring the nearest competitor by nearly a hundred points.
For
some reason, James' answer seemed to agitate the Dursleys further. He looked
quizzically at Lily, who just shrugged at him before turning back to her
pudding. James watched the Dursleys for a few moments more before shrugging his
own shoulders and following Lily's lead, turning his attention back to the
piece of cake on his plate. He kept up a steady stream of conversation with
Lily and her parents while they all finished, and he couldn't help but notice
that Vernon and Petunia had grown strangely silent.
Finally,
as though he couldn't stand it any longer, Vernon burst into the conversation
saying, "Right. Petunia and I need to be going now. Early day tomorrow,
you see. Have an important...meeting at work. Mr. Evans, Mrs. Evans. It's been
a pleasure. Potter. It was..." he hesitated before continuing with a
slight grimace on his face, "nice to meet you. Come along, Petunia."
"Good
night, Mother, Father," Petunia said formally. "I'll see you again
later this week. Lily, Mr. Potter, it was good to see you both again. Don't
bother to see us out. I know the way." Then she took Vernon's arm and left
the room.
James
looked curiously at the rest of the people left at the table. "Was it
something I said?" he asked.
Rose
gave him a small, sad smile, and said, "No, dear. It wasn't anything you
said or did." She straightened her back and asked with dignity,
"Would anyone like anything else? More cake, James?"
"No,
thank you, Mrs—"
"James,
I've asked you to call me Rose," she corrected gently and began to clear
the table.
"Right.
Sorry about that," he replied nervously and stood up. "Here, Rose,
let me help. Better still, why don't you and Lily go and relax in the lounge,
while William and I clean up?" He looked at Lily's father for confirmation
and was met with an assessing look.
"Right,
Rose. You and Lily did all the work getting dinner ready. The least we can do
is clean up the mess. Go on, you two." William shooed them out of the
dining room toward the lounge. "We'll bring some tea in when we're
finished."
James
suddenly found himself alone with Lily's father. Consequently, he suddenly
found himself extremely nervous, so he started to stack the plates to take into
the kitchen.
"All
right, James, what was that all about?" William asked.
"What
was what all about?"
"Shooing
the women out, volunteering to do the dishes. Are you trying to make a good
impression?"
James
gulped. "Um, well, you see, sir..."
"Sit
down, James. There's nothing to be afraid of; I hope you know that. I also hope
you know that Rose and I like you. I personally think you're very good for
Lily. She tends to be a bit too..."
"Serious?"
James supplied with a small grin.
"Yes,
serious is an excellent description of my youngest daughter. She's learned to
enjoy life more, since she's known you. Thank you for that."
James
gave William a small smile and cleared his throat. "Yes, well, I'd be
lying if I didn't tell you that Lily has also been good for me. I-I've learned
a lot from your daughter. I never would have got that job if it weren't for
her." He grinned. "I'd never have made it through school if it weren't for her."
"Somehow,
I don't think that's what you wanted to say to me, James."
"No,
not exactly. Partially. But not...not completely." James stood up,
adjusted his glasses on his nose, and ruffled his hair. He took a deep breath,
and plunged ahead. "Mr. Evans—I-I know you asked me to call you
William, but I really feel like I need to be more formal when I do this."
He watched William nod his acceptance and tried his best to get the words out
properly. "Mr. Evans, I'm in love with your daughter. She's the most
important thing in my life. I have a job, and some money in the bank, and I own
a nice little house. It does need some work, like I said earlier, but mostly
what it needs is a woman's touch. That house is a lot like me, Mr. Evans,"
he said earnestly. "I need some work, but mostly what I need is a woman's
touch—wait, that didn't come out right. What I need is Lily's touch. No!
That didn't come out right either, damn it." He stopped, closed his eyes,
and took another deep breath. "What I'm trying to ask without making a
total fool of myself is...may I have your permission to ask Lily for her hand
in marriage? I promise that I'll take good care of her and that I'll love her
until the day I die. But I'd like your blessing before I ask her."
He
opened his eyes cautiously and looked at Lily's father, who gazed at the young
man seriously before he stood up. "That took a lot of courage, James. Of
course, you have my permission to ask Lily to marry you. I'd be proud to have
you as a son-in-law."
James
stood and stared at William until he noticed that his mouth was hanging wide
open. He shut it with a snap and asked in a whisper, "Really?"
William
laughed and stuck out his hand to the younger man. "Really," he said,
shaking James' hand and pulling him unexpectedly into a fatherly hug.
"Welcome to the family."
James
gave him a relieved grin. "Thanks, but maybe you ought to wait to welcome
me until Lily agrees."
"Oh,
she'll agree," William said. "She hasn't talked about anything but
you since we picked her up at King's Cross. I've never seen her like this
before." He clasped James' shoulder and started to direct him to the
lounge. "Why don't you go on, now? She's waiting for you. The back garden
is beautiful this time of night, and you'll have privacy out there."
"What
about the dishes?"
"Don't
worry about the dishes; Rose and I will take care of them. You go and talk to
Lily."
"All
right, I will. Thank you again."
William
waved his hand. "Go on. Off with you."
~*~
James
stopped at the door of the lounge and looked in. Lily sat with her mother on
the sofa, her feet curled up under her as they talked quietly. He felt like he
could stand there and watch her forever. He felt his cheeks flush when she
looked over and saw him standing there.
"James,"
she said, gracing him with a brilliant smile. "Done already?"
"Not
exactly. Your dad told me that I didn't come all this way to talk with him, and
that I shouldn't be wasting my time with an old codger like him when there was
a beautiful woman waiting. Told me to come and get you and take you for a walk,
if that's okay."
"I
said nothing of the sort, young man," William called out from behind him.
"No,
but that's what you meant," James retorted with a grin.
"True.
But 'old codger'? Couldn't you think of a better description? 'Ruggedly
handsome bloke' or something like that?"
"Possibly,
but I got distracted by your daughter." He walked over to the sofa and
extended his hand. "Lily, love, would you go for a walk with me? Your
father assured me that the garden is beautiful this time of night."
She
looked at him curiously before uncurling her legs and standing up. "All
right, James. Let's go." She took his hand and started walking toward the
door. "Er, Mum? Is it all right with you if we go for a walk?"
"Of
course it is, dear," her mother replied. "Have a good time."
As
they reached the door, Lily gave James' hand a quick squeeze and leaned up to
give her father a quick hug and a kiss on the cheek. "Thank you,
Dad," she whispered, then took James' hand again and led him toward the
back door.
"So,
Mr. Potter, what did you say to my father to get him to be so agreeable?"
Lily asked once they got outside.
"What
makes you think I said anything?" James asked, tucking her arm in his and
leading the way to a bench situated in a corner of the garden. The air was
heavy with the scent of roses, and he inhaled deeply before turning to face
her.
"He
had this...look, I suppose. Like he knew some secret. One that involved
you."
"Mmmm,"
James said noncommittally.
"James
Potter, you had better tell me what is going on right this instant, or you'll be very
sorry." Lily crossed her arms across her chest and fixed him with a glare.
"Now,
Lily."
"James..."
she warned.
"Lily,
sit down. Please?" he pleaded, indicating the bench beside them. "I
promise it's nothing bad."
"All
right, but this had better be good. I don't know why you had
to—mmph."
James
lifted his lips from hers and looked her in the eye. "Bloody hell! How's a
bloke supposed to ask the woman he loves to marry him if she won't stop talking
long enough for him to get a word in edgewise?"
"JAMES
POTTER! I can't believe you just tried to shut me up by kiss— Wh-what did you
say?"
"Which
part? The one about not being able to get a word in edgewise?" he asked.
"No,
before that." Lily waved her hand for emphasis.
"Bloody
hell," he supplied helpfully.
She
looked at him exasperatedly. "After that."
"Ah.
The middle part, then." He slid the box out of his pocket. "Lily
Evans, I love you. I love your temper and the way your eyes sparkle when you're
angry. I love your passion and your sense of humour. You are the best thing
that ever happened to me, and you bring out the best in me." He stopped to
wipe away the tear that was trailing down her cheek and gave her a gentle
smile, opening the box to display the ring. "Lily, will you do me the
honour of being my wife?"
He
watched her eyes widen and almost fell off the bench when she flung her arms
around him. "I—you—"
"Is
that a yes, then?" he asked hopefully.
"Yes."
She pulled back to smile brightly at him. "Yes, that's a yes."
~*~
Remus
took a deep breath and looked at Harry after he finished the story. "They
were so much in love, Harry. I'd never seen your dad in such a state as he was
that day he told us all he wanted to ask your mum to marry him. And then when
he left to go to the Evans' house...we were afraid he was going to splinch
himself, he was so nervous. Lily's parents gave him a hard time, especially her
father, but it wasn't because they didn't like him—you should have seen
them at the wedding. They were so proud. Your aunt...well, I can't make much of
an excuse for the Dursleys. You know how they are."
Harry
snorted at that. "Yeah, I know how they are." He paused and then
asked, "Remus, how did you know all of this? You weren't there when Dad
talked to my grandfather, right? Or when he...talked with Uncle Vernon."
"Ah,
that. That was your mother's doing. As soon as she discovered she was expecting
you, she had all of us—including your father—record our memories in
a Pensieve. 'For posterity,' she said. I have it here." Remus indicated a
large box on the floor by his feet.
"Professor
Dumbledore also asked me to give this to you." He handed Harry a small,
black velvet box. "He seems to think you'll have need of it in the near
future."
Harry
took the box from his friend and ran his hand over the soft black velvet before
opening it. He stared for a moment at the ring nestled there and then closed
the lid with a decisive click. He lifted his eyes to meet Remus' and asked,
"He said that, did he?"
"Yes,
he did. Seems to think you might have someone in mind—" He broke off
as Harry stood up and pocketed the box. "Harry?"
"What
was that advice you gave my dad? Let them know what my prospects are, I've a
job lined up, a place to live, money in the bank, right? Just be myself, don't
be a prat, don't get pissed? Anything else I need to know?"
"Harry?"
"Oh,
and I should ask permission, too." He nodded decisively. "All right,
then. See you later, Remus."
"Harry?
Where are you going?"
Harry
shot Remus a quick grin. "The Burrow, of course," he answered, and
disappeared, leaving Remus standing, dumfounded, in the middle of the room.
The
End
A/N: Written as a response to
the great aggiebell90/ohginnyfan challenge of 2004. For a look at what she
challenged me with, see
http://www.livejournal.com/users/aggiebell90/19326.html.
I
had so much fun with this! Kudos to ohginnyfan for suggesting it—and for
getting me writing again. Thanks to her for the amazing beta, and to Bring and
Fly for the Brit-picking and pre-betaing. The story is better, for sure,
because of the efforts of these two wonderful ladies! Finally, many thanks to
those of you on my f-list who supported me while I was writing this! Y'all are
awesome!
And about the last section: Remus was being very persistent
in the early stages of writing this fic—he kept trying to make it from
his POV. This is the only way I could get him to be quiet and let me write
about Lily and James—the ones the story was supposed to be about.